You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Hello Mr Jenkins, I am a student at Brighton School, staying in your apartment at Blaker's Field. I am writing

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letter to voice my concerns about the broken hot water and heating facilities in the apartment. As you know the season of winter has started, making hot water and centralised heating a necessity. Since the past

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I and my roommates have been deprived of both and it has made our day to day activities much more arduous. While the workmen's did try to resolve the problem, the unsuccessful attempt hasn't been followed up. We are forced to use the school facilities for our daily bath and have been sleeping in

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to avoid the cold. On speaking with other schoolmates, we understand that other wings of your apartment don't have the same problems so we suggest you

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move us there till the problem is addressed.

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if that isn't possible, we would like to move out, and seek other housing options. Looking forward to a positive reply from you. Thanks and regards, Sheldon Cooper.