Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some folks have a notion that it is better to educate boys and girls in the

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separate

schools because of sexual harassment that can happen to girls in the mixed

school

.

On the other hand

, some people believe that putting girls and boys in a single

school

can give them

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good

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their career.

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essay agrees with the latter point of view because

exposure

and values provided by a mixed

school

play a pivotal role in student’s career and

also

due to stringent rules, the chances of sexual harassment are very minute.

Firstly

, the reason why people want

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girls and boys to

study

in different schools is because of the fear of sexual crimes that can happen with their daughters in mixed schools. As

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, the boys are becoming too much involved in taking drugs and injections.

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the guys remain high and almost lost their sense of thinking correctly.

That is

why parents prefer their daughter to

study

in a separate

school

in order to keep them safe and secure from

such

malicious practices. According to a survey

last

month, almost 40% of parents want their daughters to

study

separately because of the fear of sexual malpractices.

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of folks believe that by studying in

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same

school

, boys and girls can brace themselves better for the upcoming challenges of the career. Since today, no matter in what sector you are working, you always have to deal with your clients and co-workers effectively. So to communicate expressively and impressively with

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pposite gender, one should have the

exposure

to do that.

Therefore

according to people,

this

type of

exposure

a student can only get in a mixed

school

. On the basis of research in Germany, it is proven that students who

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in

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o-ed

school

are 2 times more likely to get

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in their careers as

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to students who

study

in separate schools. In my view, it is significantly vital to get boys and girls

study

in the mixed schools because

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in future, everyone has to work in companies where the students have to face the people of

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pposite gender.

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all the organizations select their employees on the basis of their grades.

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studying in separate schools could impediment student’s ability to coordinate with one another. Apart

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that, because of stringent rules and gigantic awareness by internet, the cases of sexual malpractices are negligible. According to the poll

last

year, there is

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only 1 case of sexual harassment in

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ast 2 years. In conclusion, it is beneficial to put girls and boys together in a single

school

because it can foster their ability to get successful.

In addition

to that, stringent rules and widespread awareness decrease the risk of sexual activities enormously.