In many countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction . What measures could be taken ro prevent this .

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of all, Steve Jobs has started his
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with the importance of a university degree. In his example, he said, "I never graduated from the
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" and through the
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he explained
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degree is not that important to be successful. He explained that at the moment that he is doing that
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, he mentioned about how he dropped out of
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. After all, about the graduation, he briefly mentioned his past. His biological mother decided to put him out for adoption. The
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family nearly adopted him but in the final stage, they changed their mind and decided to have a girl. His biological mother refused to sign adoption papers because she finds out that the mother of the family has not had a university degree and the father of the family has not even graduated from school. After a few months of the family that will adopt Steve Jobs has promised to send him to a
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. When he wents to school he decided that the school is an unnecessary expense and there is no need to finish it at all. In his words, dropping out of
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is
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of the best decisions that he made. After dropping out of
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bad days. He explains that how important is the
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class that changed his
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, "Beautiful, Historical, Artistically saddle in a way that science can not capture". He explains how important were these classes when he was designing the
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Macintosh computer. He describes all these as the
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story of his
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" Connect the Dots". He demonstrates how connected his past and his future. His
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story was about "Love and Loss". He describes
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luck as finding what you love early in his
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. They hired a guy whom Steve thought very talented to run the company with him. After the
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year, they had an opinion difference and he leaves the company. After all these problems he decided that he still loves what he does and promised himself to continue. He says, Getting fired from apple is the finest thing that could have happened to him and
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of the most creative sessions of his
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has started. After a couple of years, he started 2 new companies and
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of them is still
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of the most successful companies in its sector. He describes those years with the "Brick" example and explains when we hit our lowest point we are ready for the great change. In his opinion, there is only
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, you have to keep looking until you find out where it is. In his final story which is about death,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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