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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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Dear
Mr.
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Robert, I'm writing about the position of
Project
 Analyst, a job that your company published
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 the newspaper.
Firstly
, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Marcia Mikolaiczyki, Brazilian and professional IT with +8 years of experience in business intelligence, agile methodologies and
project
 management. I'm graduated in Systems Analysis and Development
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 2014, and I specialized in
Project
 Management in 2017.
Besides
 that, I did at least three certifications in agile methodologies and framework Scrum. I start my career eight years ago as a business intelligence developer in a multinational Brazilian company
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 and keep myself in
this
 area for four years. During
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 passion
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project
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 and people management, that's when I decide to study and start a new carrier
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 that. Since
then
, I have been working as a scrum master and
project
 manager, helping IT teams to achieve high-performance results. If it's in your interesting, I would like to give you more details and show the results I could get all long the time, and the leadership skills that can be useful
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 position. Best regards, Marcia Mikolaiczyki
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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