Many people hold a contrarian view regarding the spending of
time
in leisure activities. Use synonyms
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while
many argue that it is better to allocate Fix capitalization
While
this
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time
in Use synonyms
socializing
with family members to keep the culture intact, I think engaging in other forms of Change the spelling
socialising
entertainment
is Use synonyms
also
essential Linking Words
which
can be integrated with family members.
Family forms the priority to encourage social development in the technology-dominated world. These days, youngsters are addicted completely to modern gadgets like computers connected with Punctuation problem
, which
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
Punctuation problem
internet,
that
has diverted their Correct pronoun usage
which
mind
to the virtual world. It, Fix the agreement mistake
minds
thus
, leaves them disintegrated from their family. Linking Words
Furthermore
, spending Linking Words
time
with family would build the cultural qualities that are Use synonyms
at
the verge of extinction. Change preposition
on
For instance
, several youths have embraced the modern culture motivated by western qualities which have superseded the old Linking Words
cultural
Replace the word
culture
which
Punctuation problem
, which
include
dining together, watching Correct subject-verb agreement
includes
entertainment
together, and helping them Use synonyms
completing
householdWrong verb form
complete
.
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chores.
On the other hand
, there are two main reasons why the diversity of free-Linking Words
time
activity must Use synonyms
also
take place. One main reason is to destress from Linking Words
burdensome
daily routine. Correct article usage
a burdensome
For example
, nowadays, most of the young ones are either engaged in academic or other work-related activities that make them feel exhausted. If they Linking Words
involve
in Wrong verb form
are involved
outside
environment, they will be able to reverse Correct article usage
the outside
this
abnormal mental strain and revive themselves. Another reason is Linking Words
outside
Correct word choice
that outside
entertainment
increases the network of like-minded people. Unlike only spending Use synonyms
time
with family members, the Use synonyms
time
spent through association with people at sports centres, clubs or public parks develops a building of potential relationships that are linked with professional goals.
In conclusion, in my opinion, giving Use synonyms
time
to family is vital for the social development of Use synonyms
the
individuals, but it should not restrict them from exploring Correct article usage
apply
entertainment
that takes Use synonyms
away
from home. Certainly Correct pronoun usage
them away
spending
Punctuation problem
, spending
time
outside is Use synonyms
also
essential to Linking Words
build
external relationships and Wrong verb form
building
decrease
stress, though sometimes these kinds of Wrong verb form
decreasing
entertainment
can Use synonyms
also
be done with families.Linking Words