Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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It is observed that many countries are only depending on traditional
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, which is used very drastically.
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, some countries are promoting other sources of energies. I believe it is a positive change for
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can be more effective for global warming.
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with, the majority of countries of
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orld are relying on conventional
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systems. These are produced harmful gases like carbon dioxide, nitrogen peroxide and other gases, which are the cause of environmental pollution. The human health is
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affected by harmful gases and people will have a different kind of diseases
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as kidney infections, lung disease and heart diseases.
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, according to CNN, 35 per cent of air pollution of the
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is produced from Asian countries, and 40 per cent kidney patients are found from the same region of the
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, modern countries are avoiding using old technologies of
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. They are moving forward to eco-friendly technologies, which are produce from sunlight, wind and other things. Well developed countries are choosing are green
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system because every country does not have
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resources so they have to import it from other countries and their industries are dependent on those countries. That’s why; most the developed countries are producing their own
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plants that can help them to run their economy and
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remove the dependency to other countries.
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, a few years back, China import trillion of ton oil from Gulf countries for their billions of vehicles, but now China built its own
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plant which produces from non-conventional
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. To conclude, the usage of fossil energies are less due to health and environmental issues and every country want to become independent,
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green
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system is considered to use in
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modern.
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