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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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To Manager, I am writing
this
 letter regarding the advertisement which is published in the newspaper about the post of
the
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apply
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waiter. My name is Kailash Kamble & I worked with Macdonald as a waiter which is situated near to my house
at
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in
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 Boston. I was worked with them
since
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for
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last
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the last
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 2 years. They have hours based payment system. My primary goal is not to work as a waiter in Macdonald but I am doing it for my financial needs.
Basically
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 I am a hotel management student & I need some money for college fees as well as to understand customer's behaviour in the restaurant. I am available for 5 days from Monday to Friday in a week from 5pm to 9pm. If you schedule for Monday or Friday I can easily
available
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 for
interview
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an interview
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. I have already keep ready experience letter from my previous employer Macdonald. If I get
this
 job I will
very
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 thankful to you. Look forward to hearing from you, Your's sincerely, Kailash Kamble.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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