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in many places many houses are needed,but the only space to build them is in countryside.many people believe that it is more imprtant to preserve the countryside and not to build new houses.

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The pace of population growth involves more and more habitations, the need for construction is significantly increasing .Some people argue that we should stop building in
countryside
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 and preserve the remaining terrains, I completely agree with
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 point of view because fauna and flora are important to keep balanced ecosystem and remedy the global warming.
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ountryside is the
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 cause of ecosystem’s destruction,
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, the layout of the land requires the wildlife’s demolition,
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, ruin of habitats and vegetation.
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, many forests were destroyed and replaced by blocs of cement, putting a lot of spices in danger which will lead in the future to the extinction of these types.
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 the construction in landscape disrupts the biodiversity which is essential for the wellbeing of our planet.
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, using agricultural terrains to build houses might fix the housing issue but on another side, it will create problems more important than a lodging. The
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 one is increasing of CO2 in the atmosphere because of the lack of vegetation to absorb it. Adding to that 80% of our food is from farming, the best topsoil is in
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ountryside if we don’t care in the future it will be difficult to find vegetables and fruits.
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, studies proved that soil can store about 13% of Carbone dioxide released in the air during the 30
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 years.
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 alternative agriculture is the best way to tackle climate change issue than constructing houses. To conclude, the trend of constructing houses in
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ountryside is considerably growing, I strongly agree that we should preserve
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 soils because the balance of the ecosystem and human wellbeing is conditioned by the protection of these areas.

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