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Full time university students spend most of their time behind academic subjects. Some people say that they should engage in other activities also. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, one of the most important factors of survival is
money
 and it matters a lot. For many people
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money
 is a status symbol. In fact, we must agree to the point that
money
 plays a significant role in our
life
. So in my perspective, along with
money
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we should
also
 think about other important factors like
job
satisfaction
,
work
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life
 balance, better facilities at the workplace. Well-paid jobs are important in our
life
 to fulfil right from our necessities to
never ending
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 increasing desires. Without
money
, nobody will entertain us. Nowadays everything is becoming so expensive.
For example
 household, education, hospital expenses are not pocket friendly at all. So one has to take twice before accepting any
job
 role. When I say that
money
 is important at the same time
job
satisfaction
 is
also
 equally important. Because if we do not have
job
satisfaction
 we can't deliver 100% in our performance and if we do not perform well, we will surely struggle in our professional
life
. Nowadays, due to long working hours, high work pressure, poor working conditions people are losing their mental health and they cannot pay attention
in
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 their personal
life
. They start struggling both professionally as well as personal
life
.
Therefore
, people have started thinking in a different way. Their perspective is now changed, even though they are less paid if they find peace of mind in their
job
 they are ready to take up the role. It is scientifically proven that
job
 well-being adds to well-being and happiness to human lives.
For example
, a person earning less will be happier than the person earning big bucks but going through extreme stress and pressure at a workplace.
Thus
,
job
satisfaction
 should be considered as an important factor while choosing a
job
.
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  • extracurricular activities
  • well-rounded skills
  • leadership
  • teamwork
  • time management
  • mental break
  • academic stress
  • mental health
  • academic performance
  • community service
  • internships
  • practical experience
  • employability
  • work-life balance
  • professional and personal lives
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