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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Researches indicate that increasing
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educational rank is
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decreasing
 crime proportion. So captivates should be educated to decline
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 rate while they are imprisoning. I
am agree
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 with
this
 notion, but there are some cautions we need to take before people going into jail.
To begin
 with criminals in the jail,
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reat proportion of these individuals are not educated very well and they have no ideas about stealing, killing may affect society deeply and creates deeply injustice perceptions to state. As criminals have no
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basis
basic
 instinct about what is good and bad. If they are sued and kept in
prison
 because of criminal activity. Their learning process must be started because unless their
education
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, prisoners will start to commit again.
Therefore
 instructors should be put
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prison
 and focus the scientific technique to teach captivates. One
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example can be
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raining of Pre-frontal Cortex of
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rain.
This
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erson. it
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 the all human enlightenment notions over
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centuries
such
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life
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, moral etc. all things that
makes
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 good
person
 comes from that area. So
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nstructor should focus
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this
 area in
prison
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on the other hand
, there must be
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quitable
education
 system to make people more consciousnesses about
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committing
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. Governments must take action before
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erson
commiting
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committing
 and taking in
prison
. Enabling the social equal rights in
education
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riminal rate. in a conclusion, there should be
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o-do list for the governments to reduce
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atio of crime. one is criminals while on the jail and other before
person
commiting
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committing
 and the both them is to digging
person
 out and extracting the good
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 in their nature and only way is
education
.
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