Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

This

graph illustrates the

number

of books read by people in a four year period at

Burnby

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Burnaby

Public Library. In 2011, the

number

of books used by the women where about 5000 whereas for the men it was around 3000.

This

reading habit of both the genders rose up significantly with the numbers of

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read by men grew by almost 300% to reach

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approximately 9000 books, in 2013.

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the books read by females almost doubled by the year 2013, from about 5000 in 2011 .

However

from 2013 males

outnumberd

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outnumbered

outnumber

females in reading, with the males reaching 14,000 books, in 2014, while from the graph it can be seen that

number

of books read by the females dropped by around 20% to 80,00. To sum up, the total

number

of books read by the masculine gender rose over the years , whereas, for the feminine gender it rose steadily till 2013 ,

thereafter

declined .