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Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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 of books read by people in a four year period at
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 of books used by the women where about 5000 whereas for the men it was around 3000.
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 read by men grew by almost 300% to reach
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approximately 9000 books, in 2013.
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the books read by females almost doubled by the year 2013, from about 5000 in 2011 .
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 from 2013 males
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outnumbered
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 females in reading, with the males reaching 14,000 books, in 2014, while from the graph it can be seen that
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 of books read by the females dropped by around 20% to 80,00. To sum up, the total
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 of books read by the masculine gender rose over the years , whereas, for the feminine gender it rose steadily till 2013 ,
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