Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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large number of children insist that difficult for

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subjects,

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as maths and

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, ought to be not compulsory. Actually, I entirely do not support

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point of view because it can reduce

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tandard of living and create

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unemployment among teachers. Maths and

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definitely have to be studied by children at schools since it

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their living

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in the future. Studying of complicated mandatory subjects builds new neuron bonds in

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children can remember and learn a numerous amount of information. It develops their intelligence, and it

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a great opportunity to go to university for

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ate of

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among students.

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of the statement of Moscow

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of

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correlates directly with

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tandard of living,

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, lack of

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increasingly contributes to falling live

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. Another point to consider is that maths and

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ought to be compulsory is creating

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unemployment in

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ducation area. If difficult subjects are optional,

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ajority of children will not choose them for making their studying easier.

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, a huge number of teachers can be without lessons and beсome not needed. It will lead to waste of a state budget and teachers will be fired from schools. In conclusion, I am convinced that some school difficult subjects (

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maths or

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) should not be optional.

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because, refusing to study

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compulsory subjects not only will reduce a living standard in the future for children, but it will

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create a high

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of unemployment among teachers.