Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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ighly debatable topic that the university students whether should be allowed to pursue the subjects they like or should only be permitted to learn courses which are crucial for earning their livelihood like science and technology. I tend to agree with the former opinion that the choice of selecting their subjects should lie with students.

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pinion of limiting the choice of students, the obvious reason that supports

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viewpoint is that subjects like science and technology

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etterment of the

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. These subjects are crucial for building roads and bridges, providing advancements in medicines, improving electronic gadgets and many other purposes.

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, If universities

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their students to pursue the technical courses, it will produce more engineers or doctors,

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who will make more roads or treat more patients,

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improve the living standard of the whole

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lack of these professionals, and that will hamper the progress and growth of our

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. On the other side, people argue that allowing students to study what they like improve creativity and craftiness among them as humans feel greater motivated to do things they aspire.

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succeeding and developing their skills in fields they find interesting and enjoyable.

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, if they are forced to study the undesirable courses, it might culminate their creativity, and they could feel miserable as they are doing works they find undesirables, and

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environment could lead to a depressed and unhappy

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the importance of subjects like science and technology cannot be denied as they help in progress and development of our

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the choice of choosing the subjects is essential in helping students to stay motivated and happy.

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the viewpoint of granting the freedom of selecting subjects to students.