In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

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ajority of people but nowadays most of the people are interested to join in large businesses companies .
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there are some benefits
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large businesses ,there are some drawbacks
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of corona pandemic
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a large number of people lost their jobs .
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mall
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no chances of job
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impact is job pressure .Unless
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hard or showing extra ordinaries skills than others ,
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ood position. Due to life become frustrated.
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money is needed to start a small
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all the
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arge organization .They improve the quality
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save the cost of manufacturing .Job in an organization is more reliable than
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opportunities
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promotions in jobs .From the initial
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some one
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ighest position . Pensions
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as well as provident funds are
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people are inverted into jobs .Apart from
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it’s am upside for poor people . In conclusion ,both views have significant points of advantages and disadvantages .the
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revious scenario was
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resent scenario is different .
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