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Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages

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Having and using
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redit
card
 is easily accessible in recent decades. Some people believe that
this
 way of spending
money
 cause some issues for those who cannot return the cashback.
This
 essay will discuss why I think the advantages of
credit
card
 are stronger than disadvantages. Purchasing by
credit
card
 has two main drawbacks.
Firstly
, it is not an appropriate way of spending
money
 for all kind of people. Those who cannot control their expenses may become in trouble.
For example
, Shopaholic has obsessive and impulsive thoughts, so they are not able to prevent themselves from buying things which are not essential for them. Another negative effect of
credit
card
 is the higher chance of spending
money
 without awareness. It will happen if individuals forget to cancel the authorised payment after ending their usage.
On the other hand
, benefits given by Master
card
 are really crucial, and I think the importance of them in our life is not negligible. One of the best positive points is that they play as financial support.
For instance
, imagine you are in travel and your
money
 would be stolen, how useful could be accessing your
credit
card
? Indeed, they help us to live and travel certainly. Another merit is that individuals can afford easier. In
this
 way,people are no longer need to save
money
 and wait for ages thanks to the line of credits that make
this
 dream become true. In conclusion. I believe the benefits of having access to
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redit line are stronger than that of disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • flexibility
  • financial security
  • unexpected expenses
  • rewards and incentives
  • cashback
  • airline miles
  • impulse buying
  • accumulating debt
  • high interest rates
  • minimum payments
  • credit score
  • borrowing capacity
  • reliance
  • saving habits
  • financial vulnerability
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