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The diagram illustrates the levels of producing ethanol fuel from
corn
. There are eight main levels of the stages. The process is actualized for over two days.
Firstly
,
corn
 is storing and milling,
then
 with adding some water let it should cook for about four hours. After cooked,
corn
 will be fermenting for 48 hours. Fermentation becomes
corn
 in two different forms.
As a result
 of that,
corn
 separates into liquid and solid by-product. Process continuous with the liquid form
corn
. The sixth main level is purifying the liquid
corn
 in five hours. In
this
 chemical action,
corn
 is getting to be Ethanol slowly. After five hours, it stores for
last
 to produce Ethanol fuel.
Finally
, Ethanol fuel to be ready for the
last
 stage which is transporting to some boxes.
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