Some people believe that country economy is the only thing to measure the growth of the country. Others think that other factors are also important to measure the progress of the country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The

economy

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of a

country

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is believed to be the only parameter to determine the growth of a

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by certain people.

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, others suggest that there are more aspects to be analysed in order to measure a nation's progress.

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the

economy

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is without a doubt an important factor, I

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the

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idea

that every aspect of a

country

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should be verified separately to deeply comprehend the whole scenario. The

first

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point of view usually

suggest

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that the

economy

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is the result of the complete situation

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the nation. To

support

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idea, they claim that a good

economy

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is a product of a government that supports their educational system, health system and so on.

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, it

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that the people wealth is the achievement of a good education and availability of opportunities.

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,

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assumption is usually wrong, even though there

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definately

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definitely

a link between them.

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, people who decide that other factors are

also

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important to verify

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matter generally

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the idea that different areas can grow separately. In fact, the different systems of a

country

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can progress individually,

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they

support

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each other's progress.

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, to improve a school or the whole educational

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a government should use the money provided by taxes; if they manage to focus on one particular

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they may prejudice others aspects of the nation, even if these areas

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each other.

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, is incorrect to believe that one single aspect could provide the whole picture of the situation. In conclusion,

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both views have valid points to

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their opinions, I think that observing only the

country

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's

economy

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is a very superficial analysis.

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, if someone requires

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specific data of a

sector

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to manage better their resources, these

informations

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will not be available. In short, the best practice

is always analyse

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each

sector

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individually,

otherwise

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,

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the results could be misleading.