Some people believe that country economy is the only thing to measure the growth of the country. Others think that other factors are also important to measure the progress of the country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The

economy

of a

country

is believed to be the only parameter to determine the growth of a

country

by certain people.

In contrast

, others suggest that there are more aspects to be analysed in order to measure a nation's progress.

Although

the

economy

is without a doubt an important factor, I

support

the

idead

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idea

that every aspect of a

country

should be verified separately to deeply comprehend the whole scenario. The

first

point of view usually

suggest

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that the

economy

is the result of the complete situation

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the nation. To

support

this

idea, they claim that a good

economy

is a product of a government that supports their educational system, health system and so on.

For example

, it

is believe

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that the people wealth is the achievement of a good education and availability of opportunities.

However

,

this

assumption is usually wrong, even though there

are

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definately

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definitely

a link between them.

On the other hand

, people who decide that other factors are

also

important to verify

this

matter generally

support

the idea that different areas can grow separately. In fact, the different systems of a

country

can progress individually,

although

they

support

each other's progress.

For example

, to improve a school or the whole educational

sector

a government should use the money provided by taxes; if they manage to focus on one particular

sector

they may prejudice others aspects of the nation, even if these areas

support

each other.

As a result

, is incorrect to believe that one single aspect could provide the whole picture of the situation. In conclusion,

although

both views have valid points to

support

their opinions, I think that observing only the

country

's

economy

is a very superficial analysis.

Moreover

, if someone requires

a

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specific data of a

sector

to manage better their resources, these

informations

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will not be available. In short, the best practice

is always analyse

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each

sector

individually,

otherwise

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the results could be misleading.