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Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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Some group of people are moving themselves and their family to oversea. Some people believe that kids can get more advantage
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 another group of people believe that it is more challenging for kids if family move aboard
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 essay will discuss both views of the argument and give my own perspective. One side of moving to aboard can lead to many good benefits to kids. the
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 reason that I believe moving overseas can gain an advantage in different culture and language ,learn how
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 nationality lifestyle. For the clear example of
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 is children can use the language task to use in their education or to register their job in the future that very important in a previous time.
Moreover
,they can get the
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nationality
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ountry
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country
 that they move to.
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,Singapore if they live there for 4 years they can be their citizen. In my opinion,
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 think it can make life in the future of kids
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easier to travel or communicate the business with another country.
On the other hand
,it is challenging for children to adapt
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themselves
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ew environment. Because they do not open their mind especially in the young period of age , children are stuck with the routine that they used to do. According to the news bully problems is
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 main point that oversea kids have to deal with.
For example
 bully how another pronunciation ,
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 problem can make others less confidence to speak and learn. In conclusion , I believe both arguments have their merit. On balance ,
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 agree with children will have a
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 future and
also
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 can earn more experience.
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