Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Other believe that teenager should focus on subjects they are the best at or they are most interested in. To what extend do you agree?

It is generally a heated debate about teenagers, whether all the subjects have to be included in their academic studies. Several people object

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the idea of studying all the subjects;

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, various others believe it is quite relevant for them to opt for all. In my personal opinion, encouraging to select the subjects in which they are highly interested after high school is comparatively orientational than enforcing everything on them. According to a few studies between different age groups, after high school, teenage students tend to have increased maturity to understand their priorities and obtain clarity towards pursuing their career forward.

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, forcing them to study

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irrelevant

fields would potentially decrease their efficiency;

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their opportunities to achieve results they are determined to.

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, parents burden their kids by imposing stress to go through overall study system, which not only discourages them but

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hits them on their mental stabilities.

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, there are many educational institutions who recently began opting a modern method of categorising the fields and help

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upil to choose and shine in it.

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, it is not necessarily true that all the students should be able to accomplish

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all aspects. Each of them

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definite interest and plan to chase them distinctly.

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, there are various incidents in the history on

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,

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, Albert Einstein, who prove that excellency is not measured in achieving better score but to show their brilliance in their field of interest. Clearly,

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burden should be removed on every child for the betterment of

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society. In conclusion, burdening childhood by imposing

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studies is no help to develop and encourage every teen

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excelling their study of

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. Betterment in education systems would

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, help depromoting the stress caused in the current knowledge world.