Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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economics

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growth, there are more and more people are afforded to buy a

car

.

However

,

this

is already caused

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traffic

and environment issues. Some people said that the best solution is to make the cost of

oil

go up. In my opinion, I think it is a direct and efficient way to solve both problems in short terms, but perhaps it is not the best way. Because, to solve the problems in long terms,

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overnment

also

have to release some policies to

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ompany with it. The willing

of

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driving a

car

is directly affected by the cost. If the price of

oil

is increased, some groups of people will have

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stressed about it.

Therefore

, the people will reduce the demand

of

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driving, and choose other

transportation

,

for example

, buses, trains, subways or carpool. In

this

case, the number of

traffic

will decrease and the pollution of

traffic

will be eased.

Furthermore

, if there is a new buyer want to buy a

car

, considering the cost of

oil

is high, maybe he/she will give up to buy

one

for now.

As a result

,

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the price of

oil

can salve both problems immediately and efficiently. Reduced the demand

of

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cars and increased the

willing

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of taking public

transportation

are

also

the solutions in long terms. To deal with

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rowing

traffic

problem,

first

of all,

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overnment should stop people to buy a

car

. Rising the tax of cars would be a

one

way. If the tax is too high to afford it, people will choose not to buy

one

.

On the other hand

,

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overnment can release some promotion for taking public

transportation

.

This

method would encourage more people to take public

one

rather than drive by

them self

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. To sum up, cars bring us a lot of

convenience

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but cause problems at the same time. Now, there are too many cars on the road and pollution issues is more serious. To solve the problems immediately, increasing the price of fuel is the fastest method to slow down the

growing

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of problems.

However

, rising the cars’ tax and promoting

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public

transportation

are the methods to solve it from the roots.