Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

With economic growth, there are more and more people can afford to buy a

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raffic jam and environmental issues. Some people said that the best solution is to make the cost of

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go up. I think it is a direct and efficient way to solve both problems in short terms, but perhaps it is not the best way.

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fact, to solve the problems in the long terms, the government

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has to release some policies with its connected institutions. The will to drive a

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is directly affected by the cost. If the price of

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is increased, some groups of people are stressed about it.

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, driving

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private cars will be less, and they will prefer to use public

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as buses, trains, subways or carpools. In

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case, the number of

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will decrease as well as

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traffic

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pollution.

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, if there were a new buyer who

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to buy a

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, considering the cost of

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is high, maybe he would give up to buy

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for now.

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, raising the price of

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can salve both problems immediately and efficiently. Reduced the demand for cars and increased the willingness to taking public

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the solutions in long terms. To deal with the growing

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problem,

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of all, the government should stop people

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buying a

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. Raising the tax of cars would be

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one

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way. If the tax is too high to afford it, people will choose not to buy

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, the government can release some promotion for taking public

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method would encourage more people to take

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transportation

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rather than

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themself. To sum up, private cars bring us a lot of conveniences but

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causes problems at the same time. Now, there are too many cars on the road and pollution issues is are more serious. To solve the problems immediately, increasing the price of fuel is the fastest method to slow down the growth of problems.

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, raising the cars’ tax and promoting public

transportation

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are the methods to solve it from the roots.