In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that it is the correct decision to ban smoking

at

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public areas.

This

essay agrees with

this

statement because smoking does harm to other people who inhale its

smoke

and smoking at

such

places would create a bad example for our children. A

cigarette

is harmful

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those persons who breathe in its

smoke

. In fact, it is reported by medical officers that

smoke

of a

cigarette

is more harmful than a

cigarette

itself because it not only contains the tobacco but

also

a smoker’s carbon dioxide which makes it more lethal than

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tobacco itself. As public places are more crowded than the past, a large portion of human beings

are

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at risk of being diagnosed with diseases which are associated with smoking

such

as heart attacks and lung cancer.

For example

, it is reported by the National Institute of Health Science that, in the

last

five years, there is an increase in a number of patients who do not

smoke

but are being diagnosed with

tobacco related

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illnesses because one of their family members is a regular smoker. A lot of people are present at public areas, from teenagers to elders, and smoking in front of them would create a bad impression, especially in front of children and teenagers. As children and youngsters love to experiment

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new things, they would be curious to try a

cigarette

if they see someone smoking openly in public places.

As a result

, they would cause problems for themselves and their families if they get into a habit of smoking at

such

an early stage of their life.

For instance

, one of my

neighbor’s

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children was diagnosed with an illness related to

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ungs because he started to

smoke

after observing his uncle smoking at different parties and parks. To conclude, not allowing smoking at public places is a good decision because it would create a negative impact on our children and smoking

also

harms other people health.