You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

Dear Mam, I am writing to inform you that I will be attending
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held
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on
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18th of
December
, 2020 to 24th of
December
, 2020 at the Brock
university
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of USA Actually, I will reach
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on 17th
December
and will go back on 25th
December
. Kindly, arrange
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accomodation
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accommodation
for me. I am looking for a single bedroom , good
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area,
peacuful
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peaceful
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and
also
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prefer my own bathroom if it's possible if it's not
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I will be fine with that too. And how should
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pay for my
accomodation
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accommodation
? Do you accept
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? As well I prefer to know more about campus because I am assuming that
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might look around in college. Could you inform me about transportation? How do I reach to
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from
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? Either by cab or university have bus service. Please let me know as soon as possible I would greatly
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appreciated
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. Thank you for your assistance
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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