These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
in modern society ,people are leaving the home for study and work to other countries well some are you that it is a negative development for the children .in
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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
these days, people are living countries and take their parents with them bring a lot of benefits for them. Linking Words
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people are preferred that they will earn more money and leave a comfortable life. Remove the article
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secondly
, they move from Underdeveloped country to develop the countryside. Linking Words
for instance
, Afghanistan people migrate to Australia, Canada or American Linking Words
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they children can upgrade their knowledge and creativity. Linking Words
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, job opportunities, as well as they, will learn new culture and language. so, they have a good chance to visit new places and historical place in the new countries.so,they will expose the new nature and make new friends
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on the other hand
,leave the homey to have a negative effect on health.Linking Words
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,when changing the provincial ,there is a risk of health.Linking Words
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,when we moved from India to Canada,the temperature of Canada is Linking Words
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will suffer from cold,cough and nasal congestion
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, the foreign language is very difficult to understand. so, children can face insecure when they try to communicate with them. Linking Words
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, many westerns people migrate to leave the country but they are unable to adapt their culture and food habitat. so, they are uncomfortable with their food they don't like chills and spices cuisine. Linking Words
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, the countryside is very expensive they do not take perfect accommodation for their family.
to conclude, changing countries a good for their families. Linking Words
however
, some people will face problems like languages and cultures. I believe that migrating countries is a good decision for their families and a brighter future for their children.Linking Words
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