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The charts illustrate the information about the amount of usage of 3 different nutrients in daily meals consumed in USA.

The charts illustrate the information about the amount of usage of 3 different nutrients in daily meals consumed in USA.
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, it is apparently depicted by charts that
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dinner
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 is the main type of meal, which US people use the highest
level
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 of nutrients in it,
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breakfast involves the lowest
level
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 of each kind of
nutrients
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 given.
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Sodium
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sodium
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 has the highest percentage of usage at
dinner
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, at 43%. In terms of
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dinner
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, the rate of
sodium
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 and saturated fat used is higher than that consumed in
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other kinds
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 of
eatings
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eating
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, with 43% and 37%, respectively. The usage of added
sugar
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 in
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dinner
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 is just under a quarter. The amount of saturated fat and added
sugar
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 used for breakfast are exactly the same, at 16%,
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 the
sodium
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 is slightly lower than those standing at 14%.
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,
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snack is the meal that Americans use the highest
level
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 of added
sugar
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 at 42%, contrarily
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sodium
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 is used at the lowest
level
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snacks. The lunch includes mostly
sodium
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 and saturated fat, with 29% and 26%, in turn,and just 19% of added
sugar
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, level, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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