The charts illustrate the information about the amount of usage of 3 different nutrients in daily meals consumed in USA.
Overall
, it is apparently depicted by charts that the
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dinner
is the main type of meal, which US people use the highest level
of nutrients in it, while
the
breakfast involves the lowest Correct article usage
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level
of each kind of nutrients
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nutrient
The
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Sodium
sodium
has the highest percentage of usage at dinner
, at 43%.
In terms of the
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dinner
, the rate of sodium
and saturated fat used is higher than that consumed in another kind
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other kinds
eatings
, with 43% and 37%, respectively. The usage of added Fix the agreement mistake
eating
sugar
in the
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dinner
is just under a quarter. The amount of saturated fat and added sugar
used for breakfast are exactly the same, at 16%, while
the sodium
is slightly lower than those standing at 14%.
Additionally
, the
snack is the meal that Americans use the highest Correct article usage
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level
of added sugar
at 42%, contrarily the
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sodium
is used at the lowest level
in the
snacks. The lunch includes mostly Correct article usage
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sodium
and saturated fat, with 29% and 26%, in turn,and just 19% of added sugar
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