Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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School subjects have always been one of the biggest debates between many people
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politicians. It is believed by many that
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is the most significant course at the school, while others have opposite views on
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statement, and they think that Science and Technology are more essential than
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in recent times. In my opinion, Science and Technology are most essential nowadays rather than
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,
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has both positive and negative aspects. On the one hand, It is considered by many that Science and Technology are the most important subjects at the school.
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, these both are the most essential fields for the future
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and make
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life easier and more comfortable.
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, science and technology have grown in
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ast few decades and introduces a wide range of vehicles
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as
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to humanity which individuals can travel between two significantly far cities only in a few hours.
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, science and technology are essential for humanity nowadays which makes everything easier, faster and more comfortable.
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, individuals cannot predict and improve their future without having knowledge about the past.
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, there is a significant bond between
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and science and technology.
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, a survey conducted by Harvard
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shows that students who study
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subjects are %25 more successful than others who do not study
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, students who have knowledge about their
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can understand the importance of Science and Technology. In conclusion, literally many people migh
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ks that Science and Technology are the best way for humanity,
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, they should be aware of the importance o
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as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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