Surveillance cameras in bank, offices, shops, and streets have been very successful in reducing crime in the workplace and in public, but they are also a tool for their users to spy on people’s private business. what problems do the use of surveillance cameras create? are there any solution? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

In the 20th century

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there is a huge change

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in the industrial sector especially in the

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of developing digital devices for

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of mankind. Surveillance digital

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is one of them there is no doubt that it helped a lot in security purposes but

on the other hand

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there are

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ot of problems occur just because of misuse of these devices but we can reduce these problems by proposing

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ifferent solution which must

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to refrain ourselves from these issues.

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, the main problem in the

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of surveillance

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in those places where there is no need of it like mostly we visit

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hopping mall and the shops have installed surveillance cameras in changing rooms which

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in my opinion

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is not really important to install it on these private places so

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we must reduce the excessive

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of these digital devices they must be installed on requisite places like in shopping mall it must be on counter in and in banks it must be on the entrance and

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on the cashier room so we can

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reduce the excessive cost and limit the process of spying.

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there is one more thing we have to limit its

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to only legal authorized person where

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everyone can easily access these devices we make sanction on the

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of surveillance

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only security guards, police and other force can have access to check the footage of these

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, in banks and

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in shopping malls only the legal authority which

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concerned with

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ecurity of that particular place can access the whole features of

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and recording.

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and the most important one is the

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of

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amera which is

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lectronic device and it

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electricity for its charging and

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need

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of electrical connection for its working which means the increment

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in prices of

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ill we can

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reduce

this

problem if we installed

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only limited but important places and

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by converting their connection on solar energy like on solar panels which may help us to customize the prices of

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bills. To

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with these devices play

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ery important role in stopping crimes and we have seen that the crime rate considerably

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in recent few years by them but the problems associated with them can be

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carefully by the legal and government authority if they pay their full attention towards the positive

use

of there devices.