Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture difference. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Part of the population believes that newcomers when visiting different countries should
respect
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and adapt their attitudes to the usual behaviour of that place. Others believe that the hosting
country
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should be flexible about
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customs. Both views have important points-of-view that should be considered.
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of all,
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visiting a different
country
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is something very common in the modern world, people should
respect
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each other culture and customs no matter where they came from. People who take part as guests should understand that cultural behaviour is something important and keenly connected to the historical construction of a place;
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, not following or respecting some traditions might be considered as an
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aggression
to some people.
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, in some countries on the orient
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as India
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the cow is recognized as a blessed animal;
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, it represents an insult to
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diminishing the importance and
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they pay to that animal.
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, some flexibility should be considered when receiving someone who might not understand the importance of some traditions. People are not obligated to understand and know everything related to a
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that they are visiting;
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, it should
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be mandatory for the host
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to welcome the visitor and make him feel
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comfortable
, safe and well advised about any important subject. To illustrate that situation,
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, in some states in Brazil it is not regularly taught in the education system what is and what is not acceptable in some countries. To conclude,
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some people believe that host
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should welcome culture difference, in my opinion, should be visitor's responsibility searching for some information about what is acceptable or not in a certain
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and
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adapt his or her attitudes to
respect
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another culture and their inhabitants.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mutual understanding
  • cultural clashes
  • enhance the experience
  • smoother interactions
  • sign of respect
  • appreciation for the host culture
  • impractical
  • multicultural societies
  • cultural exchange
  • global understanding
  • tolerance
  • fostering openness
  • diversity
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