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Crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

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In today's developing world, everything and everyone has become mobile. There is advancement in all the fields and sectors. As compared to an
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oungster to get attracted in the wrong direction. I shall be discussing more on
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nternet is very easy and convenient and whatever thoughts are been generated in a kid's mind, he has
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irect way to get his answers and take action on the same. As night follows the day, a penny like
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dea in mind makes a person try it at least once and if by any chance they get success in their
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ajor reason for a person or a teen to get
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uge push to showcase their strength and courage and to portray how COOL they can be.
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 problems, which I believe is that the guardians should be able to make
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 kids understand the difference between the right and wrong. They should put fought the correct path and make them capable enough to do the rightful thing. I have a strong
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, that all the problem and the differences in a teenager can be solved with their parents being their guarding angel. To conclude, I would say adults have a major role in moulding a young person and to shape his or her future.
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