Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

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the material human’s needs take priority over the spiritual’s one.

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in the field of

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since those three areas‘ products can satisfy material human demands

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as foods, cars, houses. So, more people opt to be engineer, accountant, physician and any other profession related to

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and technology and

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to get higher paid. The other reason that

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reat decline in the number of artists is that educating

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is expensive. Most

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institutes are funded by the private sectors which cost

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for the people to take part in and most the people who are talented, cannot afford it. So, if

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overnment implements more facilities for the people in training and working in the

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industry, paves the way to flourish more and more artist and help to survive culture. In conclusion, the importance of

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and

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is undeniable, but providing provision for studying

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at schools and college levels and creating jobs in the

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sector should be encouraged and supported by the government. Promoting

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society can bring about more holistic resilience.