ome people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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when the total of 148 new productions premiered. It’s clear to see that comedies and horrors were the best selling movies. While they accounted for 27,1% of all films, they were the most popular among the audience. These genres received 65,6% of income from ticket sales.
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, dramas and documentaries were the most frequently chosen genres among independent filmmakers. In 2012, there were 70 releases of these types of movies. Unfortunately, they weren’t as successful as comedies and horrors. Documentaries are among the least selling movies that year. Other minor genres, e.g. crime or action movies rose very little money and only a few producers were interested in them. Overall, the best selling genres were comedies and horrors. There were a lot of filmmakers interested in producing documentaries, romances and other movies, but unfortunately
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