You are moving out of your rental apartment. Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye. In your letter say 1. when and where do you move? 2. why do you move out? 3. how do you feel about it?

Dear Shalini, Hope you are doing well! I'm writing

this

letter to tell you about our sudden plans for relocation, due to which we have decided to vacate our current accommodation. I can't explain to you, how much we enjoyed your company during all these months of our stay. Sadly,

31st

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the 31st

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this

month will be our

last

day here. From here, I will be flying back to Delhi at my parent's place and my husband will shift to his mom's house in Mumbai. You will be excited to know that I've got a job offer at India's biggest immigration company with a very attractive salary package and other benefits. There is just one thing

which

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that

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is making me upset is that the job location will be Delhi and not Mumbai, due to which I will have to relocate. But believe me, the proposal is worth considering. I can't express to you how happy I am about

this

chance but at the same

time

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,time

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I'm really gonna miss you and all the fun and parties we did together. Best Wishes, Sweta Singh

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