People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

In

todays

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appearence

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appearance

driven world, sugar-based

drinks

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are the new trend in our society. The number of people having these

drinks

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has been increasing day by day and there are many

reasons

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behind it. In

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essay, I will present a few

reasons

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to explain

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new trend and

also

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propose certain

alternatives

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for it. Nowadays, having sugar-based

drinks

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has become more common

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then

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ever before. These sugar-based

drinks

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are often alternatively referred to as soft

drinks

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. The market for soft

drinks

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has been increasing exponentially and the reason behind

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is something called

consumor

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consumer

demand.

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, a recent study in the US showed that 1 out of every 10 Americans either consumes or buys a bottle of soft drink every day. The very reason

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is happening is because these

drinks

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provide tremendous amounts of energy to the individual having

it

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.

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, these sugar-based

drinks

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contain

caffine

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caffeine

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to all the calories in

it

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.

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helps the brain of the individual having it to release certain hormones which get rid of their sleep, which helps them to stay up longer. These are just a few

reasons

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which explain why

nowadays

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the demand for sugar-based

drinks

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has been increasing exponentially in the global market.

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, it is not to say that

consumption

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of these soft

drinks

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does not have any harm associated with them. Since sugar-based

drinks

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contain a large number of calories, people who have it in large quantities are more prone to get diabetes

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those who have it in a limited quantity. In order to overcome

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and to make people have less sugar-based

drinks

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, they should rather go with what is available naturally.

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, it is a

well known

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scientifically proven fact that the

consumption

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of juice taken from fruits can provide sufficient calories and energy to the body

while

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also

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providing certain essential vitamins to the body.

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there are many juices of fruits that are obtained naturally which can be used as

alternatives

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. So in summary, we saw the

reasons

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why the demand for sugar-based

drinks

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or soft

dreams

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drinks

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has been increasing so rapidly around the world.

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, we

also

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noted the disadvantages associated with the

consumption

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of these

drinks

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and the

alternatives

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that can be used to replace

it

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them

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. In my opinion, the

consumption

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of naturally available edible liquids is much more beneficial and essential for all the individuals

of

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our society.

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, the use of these sugar-based

drinks

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or soft

drinks

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should be replaced by

the

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naturally obtained

alternatives

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