People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

In

todays

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appearence

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appearance

driven world, sugar-based

drinks

are the new trend in our society. The number of people having these

drinks

has been increasing day by day and there are many

reasons

behind it. In

this

essay, I will present a few

reasons

to explain

this

new trend and

also

propose certain

alternatives

for it. Nowadays, having sugar-based

drinks

has become more common

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ever before. These sugar-based

drinks

are often alternatively referred to as soft

drinks

. The market for soft

drinks

has been increasing exponentially and the reason behind

this

is something called

consumor

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consumer

demand.

For instance

, a recent study in the US showed that 1 out of every 10 Americans either consumes or buys a bottle of soft drink every day. The very reason

this

is happening is because these

drinks

provide tremendous amounts of energy to the individual having

it

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.

Moreover

, these sugar-based

drinks

contain

caffine

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caffeine

in addition

to all the calories in

it

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.

This

helps the brain of the individual having it to release certain hormones which get rid of their sleep, which helps them to stay up longer. These are just a few

reasons

which explain why

nowadays

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the demand for sugar-based

drinks

has been increasing exponentially in the global market.

Nevertheless

, it is not to say that

consumption

of these soft

drinks

does not have any harm associated with them. Since sugar-based

drinks

contain a large number of calories, people who have it in large quantities are more prone to get diabetes

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those who have it in a limited quantity. In order to overcome

this

and to make people have less sugar-based

drinks

, they should rather go with what is available naturally.

For example

, it is a

well known

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scientifically proven fact that the

consumption

of juice taken from fruits can provide sufficient calories and energy to the body

while

also

providing certain essential vitamins to the body.

Hence

there are many juices of fruits that are obtained naturally which can be used as

alternatives

. So in summary, we saw the

reasons

why the demand for sugar-based

drinks

or soft

dreams

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drinks

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has been increasing so rapidly around the world.

In addition

, we

also

noted the disadvantages associated with the

consumption

of these

drinks

and the

alternatives

that can be used to replace

it

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. In my opinion, the

consumption

of naturally available edible liquids is much more beneficial and essential for all the individuals

of

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our society.

Hence

, the use of these sugar-based

drinks

or soft

drinks

should be replaced by

the

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naturally obtained

alternatives

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