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While many believe that the extinction of some flora and fauna to be a major environmental threat, others feel that there are other important threats in the environment. In
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essay ,I would discuss both these views and assert that there are more vital problems on earth than the loss of plants and animals.
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with, some plants and animals are on the verge of extinction and people consider it as a major threat because each
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is linked to each other in the food chain,
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, the loss of one type of
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may lead to another’s extinction.
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, I believe from
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to
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, many plants and different animals disappeared from the planet on the natural process, it wasn't an environmental hazard.
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, the dinosaurs, which was once a main
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on the earth vanished away by
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which are man-made and affected worse on the environment like
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global warming. Global warming is due to the greenhouse effect produced by humans because of overuse of CFC’s releasing substances
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as air conditioners, refrigerators perfumes and sprays.
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, each of us is releasing some sorts of CFC in the environment,
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are culprits for
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environmental issue.
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,
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leads to climate change and may
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progress into the mass disappearance of all humankind and all living things.
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, due to warming of the planet, the glaciers at the poles are melting, leading to raised water levels in the oceans and seas causing heavy flood all over the world during rainy seasons. To conclude, even though the loss of different
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in the ecosystem is an environmental issue, I believe there are major haphazard like global warming, which needs to be reduced and organised for the survival of human beings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal views
  • inherent biases
  • professional capabilities
  • gender inclusivity
  • equal opportunities
  • diversity
  • unique perspectives
  • physical attributes
  • psychological attributes
  • workplace adaptations
  • modern advancements
  • legal frameworks
  • gender discrimination
  • ethical implications
  • career opportunities
  • case studies
  • real-world examples
  • traditionally dominated
  • successful outcomes
  • atypical roles
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