In some countries, people waste a lot of the food that they buy in shops and restaurants. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

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ew countries, humankind waste
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reater amount of
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that they purchase in malls and
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courts. The main reason for
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that they charge for
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and the solution
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problem is by increasing the prices in the menu and taxes. The foremost reason to throw away
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as it is affordable to purchase frequently. As the
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is low society shows profound interest
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and leads them to take higher quantities and unwanted dishes.
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, people fascinating towards instant
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whenever people feel tired to cook
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by themselves. As a
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, majority of the leftover meal gets spoiled to consume and gets wasted.
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ecent survey conducted with
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suppliers showed that 80
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of cooked
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bought from shops is wasted. To tackle
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has to thrive the
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of
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and raise the tax money. If the value of
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increased men,women and children will limit to buy lesser quantities.
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and additional taxes encourage people to prefer cooking at home rather than spending enormous money on
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estaurant's
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, recently in India
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there was a high increase in
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rice of shopping malls
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which restricted the majority of people to take limited quantities to avoid the wastage. In conclusion, selling
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variety of dishes with less
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is the primary reason to throw away the
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and increasing the
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and applying additional taxes is the viable solution to reduce the wastage. I recommend
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overnment should conduct some awareness programmes educating the people about the value of
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