A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income.Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.Do you think that benefits of tourism outweighs its drawbacks?

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industry contributes a significant portion of national income for many countries but it can have certain drawbacks.

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and provides a logical conclusion. There are several advantages of

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like boosting the country's income and creating possible job opportunities for people of

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ocal community.

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their time and money on many services like food, accommodation and transportation.These services

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an additional income supporting the country's economy.

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services

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more job opportunities which

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beneficial for the people and there would be an increase in demand

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tour guides hotel staff medical staff etc.

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the path of success. but

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has some demerits like depletion of resources in tourist destination and growth of illegal activities.In some pilgrimage sites and ancient monuments

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human traffic

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seen in common and some tourists

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mishandles public properties

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causing exploitation of natural resources

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What's more,the presence of a considerable number of tourists with a lot of money to spend and carrying valuable accessories increases the chance of thefts which may seem as

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lack mark to that particular destination.

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, proper usage of tourist revenue by local government and

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better hospitality management can definitely eliminate

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disadvantages. To conclude,

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might have certain drawbacks like resource depletion and rising crime rates, it has a positive influence on

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ountry's economy and provides new jobs to numerous people.I strongly believe that these benefits of

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outweigh its disadvantages.