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opulation of Japan started to decline after 2005 and after 2035 it will sharply decrease. The
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over 65 years will be more than 40% of
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in the year 2055. As is shown in the bar graph, Japan’s
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in 1950 was only 84
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. The
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kept on increasing without any exception and in 2005 it reached to over 127
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which was the highest
population
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in Japan. After 2005 the
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dropped and in 2015 it was just over 125
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. After 20 years the
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will drop sharply and
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in 2055 the
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of Japan would be only 89.9
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which is almost same as it was in 1950. The prediction clearly indicates that the
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to drop in the future. Again, the table data presents the numbers and percentages of
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in Japan who are over 65 years old. As is seen, the number of
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