There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Manager,
I am writing you to find out
what
how to solve the Correct pronoun usage
apply
bus
issue on the Use synonyms
line
39 Finch East regular Use synonyms
bus
and Use synonyms
also
on Express Linking Words
bus
of the same Use synonyms
line
.
As a regular customer on the Use synonyms
bus
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line
39 Finch East Express towards Nelson/Morninglane direction, I have noticed some irregularities on Use synonyms
this
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line
. Use synonyms
Usually
I do take the Express Add a comma
,Usually
bus
at the same Use synonyms
bus
stop and Use synonyms
also
at the same time, which is Finch and Don Linking Words
Mils
.
The fastest one does not stop at the mentioned Correct your spelling
Mills
bus
stop Use synonyms
any more
and I think in Correct your spelling
anymore
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last
two to three weeks I realized that you eliminate the regular Correct article usage
the last
bus
frequency too. I know that Use synonyms
here
are summer holidays that schedule might have change Correct your spelling
there
because
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ofbecause
less
students and Change the quantifier
fewer
also
more people on the vacation. But I do check your app to help me organise my transport time and the buses Linking Words
dont
show up as are indicated on the schedules. Correct your spelling
don't
Which
makes me Correct pronoun usage
This
as
Change preposition
apply
a
unreliable person at the workplace, because Change the article
an
bus
delays are causing my late arrival to work and how to explain to my boss pretty often what is going on.
I would like to write a suggestion that you might have considered Use synonyms
to join
the Change the verb form
joining
bus
stops together at the same side as you did for Use synonyms
opposite
direction, that both buses regular and express will give Add an article
the opposite
more
smoother option to Change the word
apply
customer
or add more buses on the route of the Add an article
the customer
a customer
bus
.
Hope Use synonyms
this
will Linking Words
be solve
in satisfaction for both sides.
Sincerely
R.Change the verb form
be solved
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite