There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I am writing you to find out
what
how to solve the Correct pronoun usage
apply
bus
issue on line
39 Finch East regular bus
and also
on Express bus
of the same line
.
As a regular customer on the bus
line
39 Finch East Express towards Nelson/Morninglane direction, I have noticed some irregularities on this
line
. Usually,I do take the Express bus
at the same bus
stop and also
at the same time, which is Finch and Don Mills.
The fastest one does not stop at the mentioned bus
stop any more
and I think in Correct your spelling
anymore
last
two to three weeks I realized that you eliminate the regular Correct article usage
the last
bus
frequency too. I know that there are summer holidays that schedule might have change
because of fewer students and Correct your spelling
changed
also
more people on the vacation. But I do check your app to help me organise my transport time and the buses don't show up as are indicated on the schedules. Which
makes me Correct pronoun usage
This
as
an unreliable person at the workplace, because Change preposition
apply
bus
delays are causing my late arrival to work and how to explain to my boss pretty often what is going on.
I would like to write a suggestion that you might have considered joining the bus
stops together at the same side as you did for the opposite direction, that both buses regular and express will give the smoother option to the customer or add more buses on the route of the bus
.
Hope this
will be solved in satisfaction for both sides.
Sincerely
R.Submitted by ren.repiska on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite