Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games.

Nowadays,the world has changed dramatically.There are many alternative activities for children to select.Most teenagers usually have freedom for playing electronic device

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situation is to encourage children to do outdoor activity.Personally,I strongly agree that adolescent should spend time on the outside event. Begin with, the

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main reason is it can enhance adolescent ability.When they know that there are many events

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as grouping with others.

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they will enjoy and productive for having a new community.

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,children will try to do

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they might perceive their talents.Comparing with playing alone with

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they might lose their communication skills and gets social phobia.

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,my brother used to playing

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ideo game.So he did not have any friend because he can not go far away from it.After that my mother decided to bring him to take a course in playing football.So it helps him develop

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ocial skill.

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,another main reason is healthy.

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is because people will gain vitamin from the sun.

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it can improve their antibodies.

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, outdoor sport is the best option for

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tudent to boost their performances.It is completely different compared with staying in their home and playing computer.That will

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their healths

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as short eyes.

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, my friend always swimming in the morning.

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her body accustoms to the sun so she seldom has a health problem. In conclusion,there are many advantages for children when they play

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sport.They should spend less time

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playing internet and increase time for doing

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utdoor event.