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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The best way of communicating a
message
 to common people is always debatable. One may opt for written communication is the best media to convey a
message
, while others may consider movies or films
instead
. In my opinion, moving image, like film and photocopy, is the best way to deliver a note to people due to the fact that it is more easily available, cheap and it is entertaining and does not depend on literacy. The moving picture brings endless features to deliver
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ote to common people in various ways.
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ublic either they are literate or illiterate.
Furthermore
, it is fun and entertaining to watch. Research suggests that people can understand quickly and effectively when they see something
instead
 of reading it, as it is a common human nature to interact more visually.
For instance
, advertisements are the main way to convey a
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On the other hand
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 and more powerful. It does not need any infrastructure to store it like images.
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ritten document can be the cheapest option to store and it can deliver more information. Written communications are safer compared to film as there might be a possibility that human being can completely misunderstand the inner meaning of the film.
For example
, newspaper, magazines are the best instances of
this
 type of communication which are acceptable throughout the world.
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 and understand it which is a major drawback of it. To recapitulate,
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message
 to the public. It is clear those written communications are bound to educated people not for a layman. The main idea of
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communication is to convey information to others and it should not be bounded.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visual communication
  • Emotional impact
  • Transcend language barriers
  • Universality
  • Infographic
  • Memory retention
  • Misinterpretation
  • Manipulation
  • Complementary
  • Evocative
  • Multimedia
  • Contextual understanding
  • Ambiguity
  • Visual literacy
  • Instant communication
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