You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: • explain your position • apologies and offer to come on another day or later the same day. • ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You do NOT need to write your own address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Admission Tutor, I am writing to

apologies

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for the

interview

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which has scheduled on coming Tuesday 20th March 2019 at 10 AM in the morning regarding choosing study course in your renowned

collage

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college

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. I am really thankful to you for scheduling

this

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meeting

however

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, I am not able to attend the meeting due to some personal work which is unavoidable. My uncle is hospitalized and

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20th

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the 20th

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he will undergo a minor surgery at 9:30 AM and I have to present there for taking all the paper works and other

hospital related

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activities. I am really very sorry for

this

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unavoidable situation. The course meeting/

interview

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is very much important for me and I am not wanting to waste it, so I am asking is there any way you can reschedule it to another

day

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or later on that

day

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? I hope my work will be

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up by 11:30 AM so if you reschedule it after 12 on the same

day

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then

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I can able to attend that. If you want to schedule it on another

day

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that

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works fine for me. I will really appreciate if you reschedule the meeting or change the timing based on your available schedule. One

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thing, just for curiosity, can you please tell me how long the

interview

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will

last

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approximately or is there any test I have to give during the

interview

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process? I am asking

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because

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interview

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is related to collage course selection, so I am bit curious.

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, I am really very sorry for

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and I hope you will forgive my unavoidable circumstances and allow me a new

interview

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date. Yours Sincerely. Subhrajyoti Das.

Submitted by Subhrajyoti on Mon Nov 09 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

279 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Admissions tutor
previous appointment
regret any inconvenience
reschedule
appreciate your understanding
alternative date/time
interview duration
conduct any tests
prior commitment
express gratitude
demonstrate interest

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