These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

The number of migrant's people has been increasing substantially in the
last
decades. Every year, many people plan to study or find a job
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overseas, in a manner to boost their knowledge and career opportunities.
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this
decision brings several beneficial effects on people's
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, there
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a few uncomfortable details that people have to cope when are exposed living in another
country
. Living in another
country
is
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enriching experience in
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aspects of people's life. Many young people decided to learn English in
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K, America, Canada or Australia in order to be more connected with the world. Understanding that the English
language
is the
language
of sciences,trades, and
tecnology
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technology
.
Besides
, learning a new
language
brings the opportunity to make new friends and learn about different cultures, and traditions related to food, music, history, religion, and beliefs, while others
such
as
proffesional
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professional
employees glanced at outside of their countries as joint of
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their career and looking exponential salaries and positions applying to international companies or applying for
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PhD
or master courses.
For instance
, the
last
report of Oliver Wyman Consultanting which is famous for brings technology solutions in different industries
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revels that the 60% of their employees are from overseas, the majority of
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from Asia, followed by India and South America. When
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employees are asked about why decided to
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a job in another
country
their answers are equal, they want to be challenging and be part of the globalization
also
it is the fact that they increase
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salaries and they networking. On other hand, the journey to study or work in another
country
is not always the perfect story. There are
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ew uncomfortable situations that students and foreign people have to deal
.
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For example
, Learning a new
language
for many people can be a challenging and hard achievement.
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Chinese
students are conscious that they have different letters, sounds, and words which
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not have any relation with the English
language
.
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Moreover
, living in another
country
involves
to learn
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about the culture of a specific
country
and
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anners of their citizens.
For example
, for many countries of South America the concept to say hello include a hug or give a have.
However
,
this
behaviour is avoided in countries
such
as Australia or New Zeland. People from these countries do not understand why people touching each other in
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anner to say hello. In conclusion, the benefits of living in another
country
or having the experience of study or work abroad are
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outweighed
the difficulties.
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, it is important
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e aware of the difficulties before to travel in order to reset expectations
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and prevent unhappy situations.
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