Many countries plan to ban the sale of petrol and diesel cars in the future, with governments planning to support the use of electric vehicles. Do the advantages of electric vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, many governments are actively participating in preserving and save the planet Earth by invest in benefits for our environment. in future countries banned
infastructure
for electric vehicles and putting banned on Correct your spelling
infrastructure
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onsumption of fossil fuels in future. Add an article
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This
essay will compare p
ros and cons of electric vehicles and shed light on my opinion in conclusion.
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To begin
with the advantages, the newest technological development in t
ransportation industry comes with lotsAdd an article
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Firstly
, electric cars will significantly reduced
the use of fossil fuels like Change the verb form
reduce
petrol
and diesel resulting in no emission. Pollution generated from there use will be reduced, resulting in better air quality. For instance
, currently, in India due to u
sage of Add an article
the
petrol
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ruined
runned
cars produce 80% air pollution. Correct your spelling
ran
Thus
, these cars will be much cleaner for the environment. Similarly
, electric cars are much more
faster in speed and provide Change the word
apply
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etter driving experience. It is our transition to Add an article
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ext mode of transportation. Add an article
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Also
, it help
us to save the decreasing reserves of fossil fuel. Change the verb form
helps
for example
, In Kuwait, it is predicted that they only have petrol
for n
ext twenty years, after that there will be Add an article
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uge shortage of supply. Add an article
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Thus
, it is important to save the remaining oil resources before it will be exhausted, hence
an alternative is essential.
On other hand, aforementioned though it is essential to find an alternative to replace over consumption
of crude oil, but there are countries, whose economy will Correct your spelling
overconsumption
impacted
due to electric cars. countries like Kuwait Change the verb form
be impacted
impact
trades
their Change the verb form
trade
petrol
or diesel for an example,
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apply
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,
these product
, the countries trade can take a huge hit. Change the determiner
this product
these products
Furthermore
, electronic cars seems a better option but it is also
an expensive option for many consumers. Electric cars manufacture like Telsa sell
their car over 50 thousand dollars, which is away over budget for Change the verb form
sells
m
ajority of the Americans.
To sum up, I personally believe a transition towards electric cars would be a better choice in saving the earth and reducing alarming pollution rates and its benefits Add an article
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its disadvantages.Correct your spelling
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