Many countries plan to ban the sale of petrol and diesel cars in the future, with governments planning to support the use of electric vehicles. Do the advantages of electric vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many governments are actively participating in preserving and save the planet Earth by invest in
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infrastructure
for electric vehicles and putting banned on
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onsumption of fossil fuels in future.
This
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ros and cons of electric vehicles and shed light on my opinion in conclusion.
To begin
with the advantages, the newest technological development in
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ransportation industry comes with lots
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benefits for our environment.
Firstly
, electric cars will significantly
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the use of fossil fuels like
petrol
and diesel resulting in no emission. Pollution generated from there use will be reduced, resulting in better air quality.
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, currently, in India due to
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sage of
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cars produce 80% air pollution.
Thus
, these cars will be much cleaner for the environment.
Similarly
, electric cars are much
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faster in speed and provide
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etter driving experience. It is our transition to
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ext mode of transportation.
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us to save the decreasing reserves of fossil fuel.
for example
, In Kuwait, it is predicted that they only have
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ext twenty years, after that there will be
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uge shortage of supply.
Thus
, it is important to save the remaining oil resources before it will be exhausted,
hence
an alternative is essential. On other hand, aforementioned though it is essential to find an alternative to replace
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of crude oil, but there are countries, whose economy will
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due to electric cars. countries like Kuwait
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their
petrol
or diesel for an example
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in future countries banned
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, the countries trade can take a huge hit.
Furthermore
, electronic cars seems a better option but it is
also
an expensive option for many consumers. Electric cars manufacture like Telsa
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their car over 50 thousand dollars, which is away over budget for
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ajority of the Americans. To sum up, I personally believe a transition towards electric cars would be a better choice in saving the earth and reducing alarming pollution rates and its benefits
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precedes
its disadvantages.
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