Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give opinion.
In today's modern era following professional at all professional places people wear
dresscode
at Correct your spelling
dress code
workplace
plays an important role. Many people prefer organisations should require all staff not to wear casual dresses at work
and many think should wear casual dresses. In my opinion , while not following professional dresscode
at Correct your spelling
dress code
w
orkplace has some benefits but Add an article
the
i
believe in that staff should wear uniforms at Change the capitalization
I
work
.
On the one hand , some people believe in wearing casual dresses at w
orkplace has advantages Add an article
the
such
as convinience
of Correct your spelling
convenience
an
individual employees. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
This
may be due to because wearing c
asual dress at Add an article
a
the
work
leads to the convinience
of an employee as according to his or her own wish they can wear whatever they have . Correct your spelling
convenience
in contrast
, wearing casual dresses at w
orkplace leads to inequality among the staff. Add an article
the
for instance
, i
observed at my office individuals are discriminated on the basis of Change the capitalization
I
their
status of their clothes.
Change the pronoun
the
On the other hand
, i
think wearing uniforms at Change the capitalization
I
work
in necessary because this
will reduce the discrimination and look representatives of the company. In other words
,wearing professional dresses will tends
to decrease the inequality among employees on the basis of Change the verb form
tend
s
tatus of money .Add an article
the
for example
, usuallyAdd a comma
,
unforms
Correct your spelling
uniforms
such
as schools , hospitals .additionally
, employees look like the representatives of a particular company so that anybody can recognise them by the name of that company just by watching their uniform. In contrast
, bordem
with the same dress will always be there but it can be ignored.
Correct your spelling
border
This
essay has discussed both views in detail. To conclude , some people believe wearing casual dresses at work
as its
has some benefits . Change the pronoun
it
However
, i
believe wearing uniforms at Change the capitalization
I
w
orkplace.Add an article
the
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