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In order to imporove the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teachers, but other think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. What your opinion ?

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Education
 is believed to be an important aspect
in
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 a child's overall development. Schools are the primary institutions in laying the foundation of
education
 following by colleges or university which introduces the people to intricacies of the
education
 field.
Major
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A major
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 reason for people to pursue the
school
 and
college
 level
education
 is to
be make
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 a high yielding
career
. Now the ways to achieve
this
 dream are different for people, some feel like
c
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ollege
education
 is very much necessary in building a successful
career
 while other believe that high
school
education
 ins enough to get an employment. A widely followed pattern across the world is to
enroll
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 for a
college
degree
 after high
school
 graduation. The in-depth knowledge and expertise gained through
college
education
 can never be included in a high
school
 curriculum. The percentage of people pursuing
college
 degrees has increased drastically in the
last
 couple of decades. Some studies suggest that 1 in every 10 students worldwide is planning to go for a higher
degree
 to increase the probability of having a successful
career
. Another popular contrasting belief is to get a job as soon as
the
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high
school
education
 is completed. These people feel that time and monetary resources spent on getting a
college
degree
 should be simply avoided and
instead
 the same time should be spent earning money. Why wait for 3 years to start earning when you can start it right after high
school
, is what these people advocate. Even if the
above stated
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 viewpoints have different approaches to make a profitable
career
 one thing is common between the two, which is
Education
. So if
Education
 solely holds
such
 a magnitude of importance in one's
career
 why not attain a
college
degree
 and take the
first
 and primal step towards a great
career
.
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