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Email has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using email outweigh the advantages?

The most popular mode of
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 in today’s techno world is through Emails. Email
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 has become
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 an integral part
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 people lives, be it their personal or professional environment. With
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 a vast use of emails, it certainly is considered as a boon, but
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 does not overshadow the curse it brings along. Emails have become the backbone of professional
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. Be it a small update or a high impact professional decision, emails are considered the promptest way to convey both. In most companies, thousands of emails are being sent each day;
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 ratio is far greater than the number of meetings conducted daily.
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 scenario clearly supports that a crisp and instant email is any day an employee’s favourite over what seems like a never-ending meeting. Emails
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 have affected social
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 in an adverse way. People feel that emotions get lost when interacting with their relatives or loved ones through distant emails. Emails can never satisfy the human need to connect and socialize how well a face to face conversation can. It is often argued that the
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 use of technology in
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 has made more people prone to depression and related illnesses than to what the numbers were half a decade back. With the immense extent of email usage, it is highly probable that its eradication from the modes of
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 would be a viable option. The thing to keep in mind is controlling its use and making a genuine effort to connect with people around us. Technology when used efficiently only adds the wings to take a long flight and attain the zenith.

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