Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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increased significantly over the

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century, and they got involved in the different types of

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.

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equality between

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and

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has become one of the most debated issues.

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essay will discuss whether both

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suitable for whatever job or not. On the one hand, the main reason why

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and

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can occupy the same type of work is related to mental ability and intelligence. There is no relation between individual ability and gender.

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, the most important part when someone

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for a job in most companies is the grade and the certificate rather than the gender.

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, there are

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who have become a policeman, which is quite dangerous, and they are successful in their careers.

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, there are some types of

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which

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not suitable for all. Jobs that require physical activity,

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, are more likely to be filled by

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such

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as

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and army.

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,

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are quite emotional and they have

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is called (caring nature),

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reason, they are more suitable to be employed in nursing and caring. In these instances, obviously,

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and

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have different natural abilities. In conclusion,

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essay has looked at whether

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and

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should have the same jobs or not. It would seem that

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and

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are capable of having the same type of careers, and individual ability is far

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than

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gender identity. Perhaps, with the development

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the world, females can occupy more sensitive positions.