Many things that used to be made by hand are now being made by machines. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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has played a vital role in the transformation of the world, with the introduction of machines

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all of the products nowadays are manufactured using automatic machinery.

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few drawbacks. On the one hand, advancement in the manufacturing industry has made it possible to meet the demands of the rising population

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cost-effectiveness.

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there has been a prolific increase in the population across the globe

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machine production is the only process that can supply the huge requirement of the

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as it takes less time,

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the hand-made production is far slower.

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,the carpet producers used to take months to make one single piece

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, today more than

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are produced in a single day using automatic handlooms. Not only

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the reason that selling prices of products are much affordable these days as the cost price declined and the supply increased.

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has some negative aspects

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loss of livelihood for many and

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of various countries.

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, the manufacturing rate increased,

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led to the closure of many handicraft units

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many families lost

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means of earning.

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, one of our neighbours used to produce the shawls in his workshop

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with the availability of

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factory-made shawls in abundance, he lost his business and is struggling for income now.

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movement has been a major reason for conflicts and wars between various countries as raw materials rich states are always

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a risk of being subjugated. In conclusion, with the development of automatically equipped factories, there has been a rise in the production rate

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helped to

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with the population growth

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, prices went down as the manufacturing costs reduced.

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trend of industries led to many armed conflicts

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many lost their means of earnings as their hand-made manufacturing business suffered.