In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The bar chart illustrates how often people living in the USA were eating junk
food
restaurants in 2003, 2006 and 2013. Overall, in the USA, people were eating fast
food
mostly once a week or once or twice a month, whereas few of them did every day and never. It is clear that the majority of people in the USA were eating fast
food
once a week during the three periods. In 2003, roughly 31% of people ate fast
food
once a week. After three years,
this
figure rose
sligthly
Correct your spelling
slightly
around 2%.
However
, in 2013,
this
number decreased to 27%. The percentage of people eating fast
food
from restaurants once or twice a month was at 30% in 2003.
However
,
although
this
figure decreased in 2006 to 25%,
then
, in 2013, it increased and seated at 33% approximately. The higher percentage of people eating fast
food
every day was witnessed in 2003, with almost 5%.
Then
, in 2006,
this
number
fall
Change the form of the verb
fell
show examples
slightly to 3% and it remained the same in 2013.
Similarly
, people who never ate fast
food
was 5% in 2003 and under 5% both in 2006 and 2013.
Submitted by juansebastian-t on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: